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Nowadays, plastic money replacements such as credit and debit cards are extremely popular, even more than banknotes and coin. Advantages and Disadvantages

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These days, Credit
card
 and debit
card
, so called Plastic
money
 are used more frequently than the banknotes and coins (termed as Hard
cash
 hereafter). So, they have been more famous than the hard
cash
. In
this
 essay, let us focus on its advantages and disadvantages over hard
cash
. On one hand, the plastic
money
 is very beneficial for the use, as it is very convenient to carry and make a larger transaction hassle-free. Suppose, an individual is having difficult to manage the daily expenses with the limited salary so in
such
 situation, credit
card
 can be the utmost helpful to borrow
money
 from the respective bank.
In addition
 to that in
this
 Pandemic situation of the world is more safe.
For example
, the fear of virus transmission can be very well avoided with the plastic
money
 use. On other hand credit
card
 and debit
card
 are not really safe to be used in public or at internets. Because if an individual finds out the
card
 details (say, pin and
cvv
) there may be chance of burglary which is note really possible with the use of hard
cash
.
For example
, plastic
money
 details if leaked will lead to an unsafe situation. To conclude, Plastic
money
 is the easiest way to make and transactions in
this
 modern world. It is
also
 safe when used in a confidential way, whereas hard
cash
 leads to a convenient way to transact in rural areas of the world with no facility of internet and swipe machines.
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