You work for an international company. You have seen an advertisement for a training course which will be useful for your job. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter describe the training course you want to do explain what the company could do to help you say how the course will be useful for your job

Dear Sir and Madam, I am writing in relation to an ongoing Azure
service training
available on Udemy. I am requesting management to purchase
as I am confident enough that with the help of
, I will be in a good position in terms of Azure understanding. About the
, it is
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AZ-900 Azure fundamentals training which
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over the entire
service. As you know I do not have knowledge of Azure resources. It would be much helpful if the company can buy
for me. I will get a chance to learn about the Azure from the beginning and with practical demonstrations. As all our products are deployed in the
, getting familiar with
services will polish my programming skills and I will be able to manage our online resources efficiently.
will eventually bring improvement
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our software team. I look forward to
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back from you soon. Yours Sincerely, Simran
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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