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Nowadays plastic money replacements such as credit and debit cards are extremely popular, even more than banknotes and coins. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this.

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These days banking cards
has gained
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have gained
 higher popularity than the traditional way of carrying
money
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. There are many pros of credit and debit cards
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 as safe and secure
payment
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 as well as easy access. On the other side, there are some cones of using cards like, online scams and it is not acceptable everywhere. I will elaborate my reason in the following
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paragraphs
. There is a tremendous change in usage of
money
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 because of banks and online
money
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 transactions. There are many advantages of using banking cards
intead
in place of, or as an alternative to
instead
 of real
money
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.
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 began with, it is very safe and secure method of
payment
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 as you do not need to carry the
money
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 around. As everyone has their own unique PIN, so there are less chances of safety issues.
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, it is easy accessible to everyone as you can carry cards around and make purchases without being worried about having
certain amount
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a certain amount
 in your pocket. To cite an example, you can buy things through internet anytime and anywhere as all you need is your
card's
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card
 information.
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, there are few disadvantages of using
banking
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bank
 cards.
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 of all, there are many scam websites and insecure links which sometimes ends up in losing
money
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, if you click one of the
link
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links
 or made a purchase from fraud website.
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, cards are not acceptable everywhere as there are still some areas where cashiers only accept banknotes and coins and
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 if you are paying for very small purchase. So, it is better to take
money
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 with you if you are unsure about method of
payment
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. To conclude, There are pros and cons of using
banking
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bank
 cards.
This
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 essay discussed the advantages of using bank cards
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 as secure method of
payment
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 and easy accessibility. Disadvantages
has
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have also been discussed
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 been discussed in
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 essay
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 as online scams and not acceptable at all places.
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