Recently, abortion increases rapidly and becomes a controversial topic. Some people suppose that abortion should be legal while others are against it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Killing a

child

has always been a controversial issue at present. The rate at which abortions are happening has risen rapidly. Some believe that it should be legal as it's the parents choice if they want a

baby

or not, whereas, others say that killing a

child

is no ones

right

. Well, I stand by with the notion that

abortion

cannot be legal and no one has any

right

to do so. People in support of

this

context that

abortion

should be legal justify it with the economic conditions of a family.

For example

, a family of four members cannot afford to bear a

child

due to monetary issues. They think that enough resources are not there, that are required for the upbringing of a

baby

and think it's better to abort him/her rather than to live a life in stress and discontent.

Therefore

, the family has a

right

to abort an unplanned

baby

and rather plan it later when they are financially and mentally prepared for it.

However

, there are a few who oppose the legal rights of

abortion

by stating that some families in lure of getting a

boy

baby

, abort their

girl

baby

For instance

, it has been seen that in some countries, like India, the ratio of the

girl

child

is comparatively lower than the

boy

child

. The orthodox culture prevailing in

such

countries' forces them to abort

girl

as they are considered to be burdened upon their families.

Therefore

, if

this

right

becomes legal

then

the number of girls in the country's population will be less and birth will only be considered by the gender preference.

Thus

, in my opinion, I think that

abortion

should not be legal and any

child

should be welcomed by the family either be a

girl

or a

boy

. There are programs launched by the government to financially help the people for the upbringing of their

child

. Along with these, campaigns should be launched to educate people regarding the

right

to live by any

child

and motivate them by the women success stories around the world, so that, they can give a chance to their daughters to live and see the world. I believe it should be no ones

right

to decide whether the

child

being a

girl

should die or being a

boy

should live. Both have the same rights to live and to take birth. Overall,

abortion

should never be legal and sever punishment should be given to the rule breakers.

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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Include an introduction and conclusion

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