Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both views and give your own oppinion.

Despite advancements is
language
teaching tools, learning how to speak another tongue is a difficult undertaking. There are those who believe the only worthwhile reason to expend the
effort
is to facilitate
travel
or
work
abroad.
On the other hand
, there are those who believe there are other benefits
to
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of
expanding ones linguistic skills. I side with those who believe that the only reason to learn an additional
language
is to make
travel
and
work
in foreign speaking countries easier. The only valid reason to learn a
language
, additional to ones own, is to prepare for
work
or
travel
abroad. Learning a
language
is difficult and requires a lot of
effort
. If
one
is not going to
travel
to or
work
in the country whose
language
one
plans on learning,
then
that
effort
is effectively wasted.
For example
, I studied German in university, over the course of three years, and my german speaking abilities are still very basic. In fact, I can barely understand german television shows. The time
one
spends learning a new
language
can be put to more practical uses, which may have a
directly
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direct
beneficial impact on
ones
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one's
career or personal life goals. If
one
is not going to
work
or even
travel
to another land, there is little use in learning that country's
language
. While I do not necessarily agree, others believe there are good reasons for learning a foreign
language
besides
facilitating
work
or leisure
travel
. These people will argue that learning another
language
can be useful in some hypothetical future scenario,
therefore
it is useful to learn it if
one
has the opportunity to do so. I have other heard that knowing another
language
may be very valuable, as
one
never knows where they will end up in life.
This
justification can cause
one
to put a lot of
effort
into an event which is very unlikely to transpire. Another argument is that learning another
language
can enable
one
to enjoy other cultures. The truth is that the majority of acclaimed foreign films and books are available in
translated
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translating
form, which severely diminishes the value of learning other languages for purposes of cultural enrichment. Neither of these arguments
validate
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validates
the energy investment required to learn new tongues. In summary, while there are those who believe there are many valid reasons for learning another
language
, I am of the view that
besides
facilitating
work
in or
travel
to another country, it is not worth the
effort
.
Furthermore
, as realtime translation technology improves, the need for learning other languages will all but disappear.
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