You have had a bank account for a few years. Recently you received a letter from the bank stating that your account is $240 overdrawn and that you will be charged $70 which will be taken directly from your account. You know that this information is incorrect.

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I am writing a letter to draw your attention concerning the communication received from the bank. My name is Swami and
Account
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No-1234. I
have been holding
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have held
my saving
account
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since
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for
past 03 years althogh
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the past 03 years, although
past 03 years although
the past 03 years although
the past 03 years althogh
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
have recently moved to
other
any of various alternatives; some other
another
city. I have been informed that my
account
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is overdrawn of $240 and the bank has charged $70 which shall be deducted from my
account
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. Please note that I have not done any
transcations
a written account of what transpired at a meeting
transactions
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from my
account
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since
last
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06 months. There must be some technical error
.
Accept space
.
Refer the attached bank statement which is an evidence of it.
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, you are
kinldy
showing or motivated by sympathy and understanding and generosity
kindly
requested to recheck the details and update me
accordingly
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Your usual support is appreciated. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours Sincerely. ANAND
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