Nowadays, there is a trend that reports of media focus on problems and emergencies rather than positive development. Some people think it is harmful to individuals and to society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The famous quote from the movie, Spiderman, "with great power comes great responsibility", fits well in
this
situation, where Media today only focuses on the Linking Words
clickbaits
articles that can generate more eyeballs on their Suggestion
webpages
and increase their TRP. Suggestion
web pages
This
essay Linking Words
further
discusses on how media affects the mental health of our Linking Words
socity
and an extended social group having a distinctive cultural and economic organization
society
individuales
by only a human being
individuals
focuing
on the issues and the concentration of attention or energy on something
focusing
nagative
side of the characterized by or displaying negation or denial or opposition or resistance; having no positive features
negative
world
. It creates Use synonyms
panic
and anxiety within the Use synonyms
world
and portrays a Use synonyms
basied
version of our Suggestion
sroundings
.
Many studies suggest that the more negative news one consumes, which remains the majority share of news the environmental condition
surroundings
type broadcasted
today, the more anxious one will become. Hearing only about bomb blasts, kidnappings, and government Accept comma addition
type, broadcasted
scandels
can hurt our mental health and increases the disgraceful gossip about the private lives of other people
scandals
anxity
, while decreasing the hope for (psychiatry) a relatively permanent state of worry and nervousness occurring in a variety of mental disorders, usually accompanied by compulsive behavior or attacks of panic
anxiety
better future
. Suggestion
a better future
For example
, Linking Words
last
month my home country Pakistan Linking Words
imporved
its made more desirable or valuable or profitable; especially made ready for use or marketing
improved
possition
in the index of the particular portion of space occupied by something
position
dengirous
countries in the involving or causing danger or risk; liable to hurt or harm
dangerous
world
, Use synonyms
however
, media heavily covered the Linking Words
plan
crash happening around the same time in Karachi, resulting into 90% decline in domestic air travel.
an aircraft that has a fixed wing and is powered by propellers or jets
plane
Furthermore
, only reporting Linking Words
emerrgencies
can a sudden unforeseen crisis (usually involving danger) that requires immediate action
emergencies
also
create unnecessary Linking Words
panic
in societies, and create a void for Use synonyms
spamers
and fake-news army to fill, misleading more people someone who sends unwanted email (often in bulk)
spammers
as a result
. When people are only fed with Linking Words
uncocked
news about not firmly fastened or secured
unlocked
uncooked
emergencies it
creates questions, which creates a sense of emergency and Accept comma addition
emergencies, it
panic
. Use synonyms
For example
, when the COVID-19 Linking Words
pandamic
hit the epidemic over a wide geographical area
pandemic
world
in February, Use synonyms
premeture
media reports born after a gestation period of less than the normal time
premature
disruppted
the nation in my country, which created a marked by breaks or gaps
disrupted
panic
and resulted into riots Use synonyms
agaist
in contact with
against
government
.
In Suggestion
the government
colcusion
, I think a position or opinion or judgment reached after consideration
conclusion
media
has a power to shape thinking, which they should be Suggestion
the media
using
more Suggestion
used
creafully
and try to show a whole picture rather taking care or paying attention
carefully
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then
create a bubble around us. Governments can conjunction used in comparatives
than
also
play a role in solving Linking Words
this
problem by tightly regulating the bodies.Linking Words
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