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alive. Evolution of electronics has always fascinated me, from how a calculator works or a remote-controlled car operates, to how actual smartphone functions.
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a bachelor’s
in engineering. I secured the seat in Electronics and Communication Engineering at Swami Vivekanand Institute of Engineering and Technology, one of the reputed colleges of Punjab Technical University, Punjab. The Bachelor of Engineering program in electronics and communication engineering not only helped me to build a solid foundation of electronics and communication engineering
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made me conceptually sound in the vast field of computers. I visualized the beauty of computer science and programming after dealing with the subjects like Fundamental of computer programming & IT and Object-oriented programming using C++ during my undergraduate studies, and developed deep
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in them after realizing that every sophisticated electronic hardware need smart
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to produce the desired outcomes. During my final semester of the undergraduate studies, I went for the industrial training at AVON meters private limited. As a trainee there, I was given the task to understand and optimize the existing embedded C programs developed for the
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in programming even
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two years of engineering. Continuing with my
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, after finishing my undergraduate degree, I started working with SSPL Engineers & Contractors in Chandigarh, India. I was working on testing, optimization of the programming code in embedded C for the solar charge controllers, adding more protection features and make them more efficient in harvesting the solar energy. I was
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helped me improving my
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of the various hardware and
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components used in the solar photo voltaic systems for commercial and household applications. It
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algorithms used in the solar charge controller to maximize the solar energy harvesting. While analysing the different algorithms, I was able to identify the corner case scenarios where they don’t
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as expected.
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the importance
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applications. In 2015, I got the opportunity to
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with Eclerx limited as
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a Junior Analyst
where I was responsible to test the
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application
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where user can enrol themselves and enjoy various entertainment services on their television and smart devices automatically depending on their
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mentioned in the
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during enrolment. After that, in 2016, I started working with Basware India private limited as a Validation specialist where I indulged in testing a
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application
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that used to convert a paper invoice into digital invoices with all the correct details. The exposure
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about automation techniques in
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testing using selenium with Java, SoapUI and J-meter for load testing. After completing the training, I joined in Bebo Technology as a
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Engineer in 2017 and working there presently. Doing my job responsibilities at Bebo Technologies, I felt the need to gain
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experience in the IT
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as a
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testing engineer, while debugging the critical performance issues and verifying the
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applications against the business requirements frequently, I found improperly written codes and specification holes. Defective data modelling, suboptimal business logic in
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design and problems in integration
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, innovation and leadership skills are needed to keep them up and running round the clock without any issues. Innovation in any
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process to implement innovative ideas is another vital aspect. To be a good manager in
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skills, effective communication, liaising with stakeholders and
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of the latest technological tools in order to accomplish the task in a planned and innovative manner.
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Testing, Innovation, Technicality and
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skills are utmost important.
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internal to, not outside; located in the bounds of
within
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testing, commingled with Innovation and Technology
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degree would help me to expand the horizons of my
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and seek the senior leadership roles in
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quality assurance. I feel that master’s in Technology Innovation
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at Carleton university will equip me with Innovation,
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testing
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