Films were produced by big companies in the past, but today people are able to make a film. Do you think this trend is positive or negative?
Nowadays, it is commonly accepted that
film
can be created not only by professional directors but also
by amateur filmmakers. Although
many people concerned about some problems related to this
trend, I advocate to support this
idea.
It can not
be denied that there are some problems that can not
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films
produced by non-trained directors generate. A frequent criticism against Suggestion
the films
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is that many films made by them can descend into low quality. In fact, unlike big film
companies, amateur film
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the necessary modern technology
film
or do not have enough experience to construct good scenarios. No wonder, although
there are more and more films created, only a few of them are supported by viewers. An additional downside is that people will take advantage of this
to make films with bad content. For example
, some genres of film which
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manner of acting or controlling yourself
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However
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above mentioned
also
enormous. One obvious benefit is that kinds of film
will become more varied with especially unique ideas. More specifically, many inexperienced filmmakers coming from different cultural context
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a different cultural context
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abilities to come up with uncommon scenarios which attract many viewers. Another upside of Suggestion
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is that making films can be a decent part-time job which helps people make a living. Indeed, a film
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YouTube
network which
hold public attention will bring money to creators as an extra salary per months, helping them enhance their quality of life.
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In conclusion
film
produced by amateur filmmakers bring far outweigh its disadvantages. By considering all the pros and cons, I personally think that the government should have proper laws to encourage people to confidently create their films.Submitted by Andy on
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