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CYCLING IS MORE ENVIRONMENTALLY FRIENDLY THAN OTHER FORMS OF TRANSPORT. WHY IS IT NOT POPULAR IN MANY PLACES? AND HOW TO INCREASE ITS POPULARITY.

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Bicycles are one of the vehicles that does the least harm to the environment;
however
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, people using them are not as many as other vehicles. There are several reasons
such
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 as its time
consumption
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consuming
 and inconvenience. And there are
also
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 some solutions to increase the number of cyclists on the route.
To begin
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 with, there are several reasons why few people use bicycles by themselves. The
first
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 disadvantage of cycling is that it takes a lot of time to ride a
bicycle
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instead
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 of other vehicles to go on the same route.
For example
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, the way to my
work
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 place takes me about thirty-five minutes to go by
bicycle
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 compared to twenty minutes to go by motorbike.
As a result
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, I have to arrange my time to go to
work
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 by bike fifteen minutes earlier every day. The
second
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 disadvantage of using bicycles is that it is inconvenient to go by
bicycle
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. It takes up a lot of energy to ride; especially on hot days, it makes us extremely sweat in
suit
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a suit
the suit
.
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 leads to our irritation
for
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of
 the rest of the day after that and our less concentration on
work
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. Several effective solutions should be taken to increase the number of
bicycle
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 users. The
first
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 solution is that the authority can encourage habitants by utilizing the sparkling image of a celebrity riding a bike to
work
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 to live a healthier life.
This
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 may result in creating a good trend for the crowd especially the youth. The other solution merges from the project named “public bicycles”. There are fences of bicycles
every where
to or in any or all places
everywhere
 accessibly put in public for people to use. The authority
also
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 builds a system of paths for bike riders to keep them safe.
This
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 increases the habit of using bicycles more
often not
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often, not
 only for
exercising but
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exercising, but
also
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 for
better living environment
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a better living environment
. In conclusion, there are some reasons why bicycles are becoming less common in today’s world, and solutions should be produced early to promote
this
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 environmentally friendly means of transport.

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