These days many of us prefer to throw damaged things away, whereas in the past people used to repair damaged items and keep them for a long time.� Explain why you think this change has happened.� What are the effects of this change in attitude?

It is true that people tend to discard their old or damaged possessions these days, rather than repairing them. There are various reasons why we behave in
this
way, and it seems to me that the effects are largely negative. There are three main reasons for
this
trend.
Firstly
, advances in technology enable companies to produce
large number
Suggestion
a large number
large numbers
of goods faster than ever, and costumers can buy items with
low
Suggestion
lower
prices than before. Samsung company,
for example
, produces thousands of television every day and all individuals can buy
this
commodity with reasonable prices if their old one is not working any more.
Secondly
, advertisements promote consumerism culture and encourage us
to buying
Suggestion
to buy
the latest new objects rather than repairing the old possessions.
Finally
, people are too busy with their jobs and making a living, and they do not have enough time to
mending
Suggestion
mend
their old or broken things. The most important consequence of
this
attitude is that raw materials
such
as trees, metals and fossil fuels are running out in order to produce new objects.
Furthermore
, we produce more waste than ever with throwing away damaged items and even plastic garbage doesn't break down easily and add to litter problem.
Finally
, increasing number of companies, which are producing large quantities of goods, release huge amount of gasses
such
as carbon monoxide that cause global temperature to rise. In conclusion, several factors have caused
this
behavior
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
, and
this
trend has negative impacts on our lives.
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