Air traffic is increasingly leading to more noise, pollution and airport construction. One reason for this is the growth in low cost passengers'flights, often to holiday destinations. Some people say that governments should try to reduce air traffic by taxing it more heavily. Do you agree or disagree ?

With the development of lifestyle
,
Accept space
,
traveling
the act of going from one place to another
travelling
is
also
an important
demand especially
Accept comma addition
demand, especially
the travel to
another
not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied
other
countries, so
air
plane
is one of the
populartransportation
Suggestion
popular transportation
. To attract the tourists, there are many
airport encouraging
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airports, encouraging
airports encouraging
passengers by the low-ticket flight. That causes
air
pollution and noise pollution seriously.It is
also
believed that taxing heavily
of
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on
government
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the government
governments
to increase
ticket’s price
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the ticket’s price
is
also
a good measure to solve
this
problem. I strongly disagree both
this
idea.
First
of all, the business whose work is going out of the countries have to cooperate with oversea to develop career, so It will be convenient to choose
air
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an air plane
plane
for their transportation. They are ready to pay more money than
normal price
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the normal price
normal prices
to use
plane
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the plane
a plane
.
Besides
, today, in spite of the high tax, more and more people with all of ages want to travel to other countries.
For instance
, With the young, they love exploring the world and understand meaningful lessons about the culture and tradition With the older, they will
also
want to travel more after retirement not to miss the time for relaxing.
Second
, the trend of
world
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the world
is
globalization
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globalizing
, so
air
plane
is a very important method to connect among countries together.
Plane
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The plane
is
also
chosen to use as a common
transport
Accept comma addition
transport, although
although
the ticket is more expensive.
For example
, Using
air
plane
to go to Singapore of Vietnam business for their cooperation is faster and more convenient than using
car
Suggestion
a car
or other transports. In conclusion,
air
traffic is a major transportation
that is
the reason why government should keep reasonable price in the future to boost the economy development.
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