Air traffic is increasingly leading to more noise, pollution and airport construction. One reason for this is the growth in low cost passengers'flights, often to holiday destinations. Some people say that governments should try to reduce air traffic by taxing it more heavily. Do you agree or disagree ?

The recent development of

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traffic has resulted in the increasing of noise,

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pollution and more land is used to build airports and runways. The growth of low-cost and holiday flights is one factor to

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, which

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people to ask the government to raise the tax

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on

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travel

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.

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, I do not believe that

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the act

should be enough to reduce the consequences and there can be economic disadvantages caused by it.

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and foremost,

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travel

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has been the most modern type of transportation

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less harmful to the environment than cars, trains or ships. It is true that the sound of an

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plane

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is so loud that it can be heard from far away and

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short-time deaf to people that are nearby.

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,

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why the airport is so large to reduce the effect of its noise to local people, and a

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does not stay

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is not staying

in a sky for a long time that it cannot

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harm to people on the ground.

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, the pollutions caused by a

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are usually minor and have

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a smaller effect

to the ozone layer than car

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immunity from an obligation or duty

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of to the sea than oil spills.

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, taxing flights heavily and

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becoming greater or larger

increasing

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tickets may succeed in discouraging people to

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by

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.

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, that may

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do harm to the development of

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transport, fewer people using its service can lead to bankruptcy of many

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express and countries like France or Germany can suffer economic loss

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for

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industry is very important to them.

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, apart from

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the plane

a plane

, people will likely choose cars and trains or ships to

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and that will only increase the risks of pollutions. In summary,

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traffic is not only more eco-friendly than other long distance transports but it is only a vital part of a country’s

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economy

economies

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Therefore I

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believe raising the tax of

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travel

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is not a practical way to solve the problems,

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we should ask and fund the development of technology in

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transport so that it can

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less problems.