In most parts of the world, the volume of traffic is growing at an alarming rate. In the form of an assignment, discuss about the main traffic problems in your country, their causes and possible solutions.

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Nowadays, the amount of
traffic
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is rising at
serious rate
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a serious rate
serious rates
in almost countries. There are some consequences that caused by its rising and some
mesures
determine the measurements of something or somebody, take measurements of
measures
should be
imprented
(used especially of ideas or principles) deeply rooted; firmly fixed or held
implanted
to solve
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problem
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. The main
problem
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for
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of
the rising of
traffic
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is the number of cars and motorbikes on the
road
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. It occurs when a volume of
traffic
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generates demand for space greater than the available
imfrastructure
the basic structure or features of a system or organization
infrastructure
infrastructures
capacity
.
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.
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, in my country roads are quite small and is rush hour many vehicles always increase and it causes
traffic
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congestion. Another
problem
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is that
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growth has a a consequence on air quality. Almost vehicles more are consuming non-
renenable
that can be renewed or extended
renewable
source and have released the amount of
cacbon
an abundant nonmetallic tetravalent element occurring in three allotropic forms: amorphous carbon and graphite and diamond; occurs in all organic compounds
carbon
dioxide into the air.
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can actually pollute the environment and cause global warning.
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, there is the
problem
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of health caused by the vehicle users. Many pedestrians will suffer from a lot of problems about health
such
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as headache and shortness of breath if they inhale the exhaust fumes released by means of transports the
road
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Some solutions should be taken out to alleviate the rising of
traffic
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. One step is that people should raise
awereners
having knowledge of
awareness
about using public transport, they should commute by bus and train.
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not only reduces the number of vehicles on the
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road but
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road, but
also
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prevent toxic emissions from releasing into the environment. The
second
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mesure
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measure
measures
major
is that government should pay money to update roads which is separating
peaestrians
lacking wit or imagination
pedestrians
and transports.
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, some
restritious
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may be
inposed
set forth authoritatively as obligatory
imposed
to ban
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ban
most of vehicles on the
road
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in rush hour. In
conlusion
a position or opinion or judgment reached after consideration
conclusion
, the volume of
traffic
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is growing at serious rate and
this
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causes many problems about the environment and health.
However
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, there
some
one or some or every or all without specification
any
solutions that are
impremented
forced or compelled or put in force
implemented
to solve
this
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issue.
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