Task 2: Meat production requires relatively more land than crop production. Some people think that as land is becoming scarce, the world’s meat consumption should be reduced. What measures could be taken to reduce the world’s meat consumption? What kinds of problem might such measures cause?

In recent years, the industry of

meat

production has been developed all over the world. Many people assume that

meat’s

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meat

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consumption worldwide, which

taking

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large areas to establish, needs a

consirable

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considerable

reduction as the land is no longer available to offer citizens. Several solutions to address

this

issue may relate to

government’s

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intervention

however

, still

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some problems. It is undeniable that education would play a vital role

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people’s cognition about their balanced diets. Numerous

children

in

this

modern age are not in

favor

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of consuming vegetables which contain minerals and vitamins for their healthy

developments

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.

Therefore

, the government should allocate

as well as

conduct more research on health education that

help

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children

understand the advantages of eating other

food

besides

meat

. Notwithstanding,

this

is considered

as

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a long-term strategy that might take years to persuade people to diminish

meat

consumption.

Besides

,

due to

the fact that fast

food

production is one of the

most

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apply

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sectors generating mainly from

meat

,

this

industry should be restricted by

government’s

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government

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regulations. To start with, the government should ban

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openning

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opening

food

stores around schools since

children

are the target of

this

type of business.

Secondly

, companies and niches in

this

industry would not have

allowance

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an allowance

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of operation unless they can

response

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to the strict

accessments

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assessments

on ingredient origins

along with

the processing quality.

Nevertheless

, people with low income may struggle with daily meals as junk

food

is inexpensive and does not require much time to eat. In conclusion, there are some suggestions

could

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deal with the problem of producing

meat

which are educating

children

and restricting fast-

food

companies. Unfortunately, applying these solutions is not totally effective since it

also

bring

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another issue.