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More and more people want to buy clothes, cars and other items with famous brands. What are the reasons? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

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Luxury brands
is becoming
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are becoming
 a trend among
people despite
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people, despite
 their classes or genders. Even though there are still controversial opinions about how deeply people into
this
 phenomenon;
however
, the benefits it brings to the development of society are undeniable. There are two reasons for the decision to choose
these merchandises
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this merchandise
.
Firstly
, obtaining a luxury
brand
 gets people’s admiration and reflects the current economic situation. Launching a
brand
 demands plenty amount of researches to decide the market
segmentation its
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segmentation, its
 products, whether it is low-end, mid-end, or high-end. Some certain names had built their own reputation throughout the history of the industry.
Therefore
, the price of these brands’ products
set
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sets
 the standard
to
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for
 any others in the same
product
 line.
In addition
, some luxury merchandises can be charged higher than usual to reflect the value of its
brand
 name.
As a result
, having their
product
 in the collection not only increase the financial value but
also
 distinguish individuals in high class from other classes.
Secondly
, products from a familiar
brand
 is more reliable in terms of quality and warranty. These are the core criteria when a customer
decide
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decides
 to purchase a
product
. The durability of a
product
 can measure the satisfaction of customers to the
brand
.
Thus
, in most cases, it reflexes the popularity of a
brand
. Warranty services can not be
underestimate
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underestimated
 when considering whether a
brand
 is good or not. The satisfaction of customers will contribute to the reputation of famous brands which attracts more and more buyers. In conclusion, the increase in the sale rate of well-known brands in many fields of the market can positively
affected
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affect
 to the development of the economy for its standards and the guaranteed quality
to
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of
 its products.
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