As a country develops, more people are able to purchase a car. Do you think that the positive for the individual outweigh the negatives for the environment?

In the new era of globalisation, the development of heavy industries, especially

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manufacturing, has been inextricably intertwined with consumers’ needs and

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. It is believed that economic growth of a country will facilitate a major purchase of cars in the world. From my perspective,

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practice will exert more severe pressures on the

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than

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the benefits

it brings to

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buyers.

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with, it can be said that purchasing automobiles

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some noteworthy positive aspects. The most noticeable merit of

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possession is that commute time will be significantly shortened to bring the conveniences for commuters. To illustrate, city dwellers in Tokyo’s centre are obligated to take nearly 2 hours for their itinerary to Utsonomiya whereas it merely takes 1 hour by

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on

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a major road for any form of motor transport

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. Another benefit of

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kind of transport is in-

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entertainment in which people are unlikely to perform in public vehicles. Undoubtedly, people could relish the melodious rhythms of their favourite songs or radio channels, or even maintain on-phone communications through

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as earphones or speakers. Despite the mentioned advantages, some detrimental effects on the

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still exist. One of the most noticeable predicaments is air pollution deteriorated by hazardous gases. Vehicle emissions

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have been proven

to alleviate air quality, especially in affluent countries.

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, according to some scientific research, cars emits around 34 per cent of nitrogen dioxide into atmosphere together with a large amount of carbon

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dioxide, which

triggers some health-related consequences

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as asthma, or lung cancers.

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, the amelioration of traffic infrastructure has exacerbated the pristine condition of the natural

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in which natural catastrophes are predicted to happen as a matter of time. The imbalance of local ecosystem will be another drawback when excessive fuels are used to operate a huge number of cars. Extracting fuel from the Earth and

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shipping them is an energy-intensive process in which oil spill could occasionally occur and put the

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at serious risk. In conclusion, purchasing cars to suit individual

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preferences, namely

commuting and conveniences is an inevitable trend in the modern world.

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tantamount to significant challenges to the

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as analysed above. It is recommended that consumers should contemplate the options before

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their own cars.