The first smartphone was released in 1992. By then year 2020 there may be as many as 2.5 billion smartphones in the world. The use of smartphones is decreasing our collective intelligence because we are reliant on the technology and not our own minds. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
There is no doubt that within a short span of time the development of a mobile phone is
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commendable
humans hugely
depend on Accept comma addition
humans, hugely
this
piece of equipment in our day to day life
; therefore
, the life
can be planned intellectually.
One significant point here is organisation
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of
a day with much precision. Suggestion
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In other words
, this
gadget assists to plan to do list based on the priority and a special software remind the user to act at correct timing
. Suggestion
the correct timing
For example
, alarm clock gives a walk up call every morning and reminder tells whose birthday today or anniversary. By doing these
, the user can function more effectively since he would memorize to denotes a person or thing
this
fullfil
his responsibility at put in effect
fulfil
right time
.
Another reason why I think that depending on a smartphone is effective because many applications in the electronic devices would minimize the human work in a dramatic rate. Suggestion
the right time
In other words
, there are different kinds of equipment are replaced by the mobile phone and this
is an
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This
can easily understand, for instance
, by calculating daily expenses and storing contacts unlimitedly
to a server, which was previously done by the man himself. Alternatively, there is a chance of happening errors, if it is done by a human mind.
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life
as this
can change the way of people think, plan and live their life
. I, strongly, believe that the device enables us to take decision
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite