Some people think that large , impressive buildings are important for a city. Others believe that the money should be spent on improving schools and hospitals. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays more

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Nowadays, more

and more buildings are constructed due to the urbanization and the demand of the national economy,

espcially

to a distinctly greater extent or degree than is common

especially

the diplomatic economy like tourism. They play

such

an important part for the

city

that many people think the government should invest money

on

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in

the building construction while the others (are opposite) think differently. They believe that money should be spent on improving schools and hospitals

instead

of just focusing on those buildings.

This

essay will discuss about both these views. There is no doubt that buildings benefit from tourism. They are attractive tourist destinations today.Tourists will be immediately impressed by their heights and architectures when they

first

see them.

Moreover

, they are

such

ideal places to overlook and catch the spectacular sceneries of the

city

, take photos to post on Instagram or Facebook and have the best services

such

as accommodation, shopping...

Consequently

As a result

, it impulses the development of tourism leading to the enhancement of the economic situation and widened relationship with other countries.

Additionally

, buildings

also

work as the symbols of the

city

.

For instance

, Landmark 81 has

reputation

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a reputation

the reputation

for being the tallest building in Ho Chi Minh

city

and Saigon’s new symbol of prosperity. Foreign tourists are fascinated by its unique architecture and shopping service. At the height of 461 metres, they can contemplate the tranquil panoramic river views.

Besides

the growth of buildings, schools and hospitals are considered to be good choices to invest money on in. Even though they’re less noticed, it does not mean they’re not essential. Both of them decide the success and development of a

country

. Can you imagine without schoolings and health

care what

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care, what

would happen? They are the most basic demand of all. Schooling examines the academic levels of each

country

, and it

affacts

have an effect upon

affects

effects

affects qualifications of

labor

a social class comprising those who do manual labor or work for wages

labour

and people’s awareness and knowledge. Health care helps people to treat physical and mental illness and make sure they have good health to do anything effectively. Unless a

country

has none of those factors, it will go downward rapidly. Improving schools and hospitals not only heighten the qualifications of the

workforce but

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workforce, but

also

guarantee the welfare. In conclusion, I think that both views are relevant. Apart from constructing buildings, schools and hospitals should be more concerned about to meet economic, social and political needs.

Therefore

, the

country

will strongly and

wealthily

in a manner that is good for the health; in a healthy manner

healthily

develop.