Public transportation could be made free of charge.Are there more advantages or disadvantages to this change.
The transportation, education and health services are the right of each and every citizen as they are paying the taxes to the government for providing these services. Some people opine that, public shipment should be made free of charge. From my point of view, it is having demerits outweigh the merits and these are articulated in the ensuing paragraphs.
To commence with, there are many advantages of the free shipping.
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reduces the traffic congestion. Linking Words
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, it leads to less pollution due to less amount of emission of the toxic gases. Linking Words
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, the citizens have been more benefited with Linking Words
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free service because they have not to make a budget for the transit services.
In sharpest contrast, it is having many disadvantages. Linking Words
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of all, the transportation provides the most of the portion of the revenue of the country. If the nation will make it free, Linking Words
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it might cause the adverse effects to the economical balance of the country, and to maintain Linking Words
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the ruler have to increase the amount of taxes on the other services Linking Words
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, it is less benefited to the government and the individual. Linking Words
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, it may make the recession in the mechanical era and car production companies, which leads to layoff in the mechanical companies, which surges the unemployment. Linking Words
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, the most of people prefer to commute with the public buses, the authority should have to increase the number of the buses, which requires a large amount of money.
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, the public transportation is good for the environment and in pollution reduction, it is having negative impacts on the government to maintain the economic balance. Linking Words
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, despite of providing free shipping services, the authority has to improve the standard of the services which encourage people to use it.Linking Words
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