Nowadays in many countries more and more people are spending their time away from their families. Why is this? What are the effects on themselves and on their families?
It is true that focusing on working and studying make family members do not have enough
time
to be close. That leads to many impacts
to their Suggestion
the many impacts
life
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life, such
such
as emotions, quality of life and understanding each other.
There are various reasons why people might argue that people do not have time
for their family. Firstly
, both parents often work full time
, hence
they spend less time
with their children. My uncle
family is an example, he and his wife work all Suggestion
uncle's
day even
in the evening, so their children left babysitters or alone. Accept comma addition
day, even
Besides
, nowadays children have to study much at school and less contact with their family members. I always want to have time
with my family but due to studying much at university ,
so it is difficult for me to spend my Accept space
,
time
with them. Working and studying are two main factors make people could not spend time
on enjoying life with family.
With these lifestyles, people become much busy
and cause many impacts to them. The Suggestion
busier
first
effect is gapping between parents and children. When family members do not spend time
together, they could not have chance
to understand each other and Suggestion
a chance
the chance
then
they tend to be disagree
in various cases. Another point is that their children might have negative Suggestion
to disagree
behaviors
. When parents do not spend manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviours
time
for their kids, they will have much time
with their friends and then
they could learn bad things such
as cheat
, play games or even nip. talk socially without exchanging too much information
chat
Thus
, spending less time
for family leads to many bad effects.
In conclusion, working and studying are key implements for spending less time
for their family which
cause various effects for children Accept comma addition
family, which
behaviors
and manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
relationship
between parents and kids. It would be necessary for humans to try to invest Suggestion
the relationship
time
sharing difficulties and happiness with family members.Submitted by Andy on
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