Nowadays in many countries more and more people are spending their time away from their families. Why is this? What are the effects on themselves and on their families?

It is true that focusing on working and studying make family members do not have enough

time

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to be close. That leads to

many impacts

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the many impacts

to their

life

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life, such

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as emotions, quality of life and understanding each other. There are various reasons why people might argue that people do not have

time

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for their family.

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, both parents often work full

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,

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they spend less

time

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with their children. My

uncle

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uncle's

family is an example, he and his wife work all

day even

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day, even

in the evening, so their children left babysitters or alone.

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, nowadays children have to study much at school and less contact with their family members. I always want to have

time

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with my family but due to studying much at university

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so it is difficult for me to spend my

time

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with them. Working and studying are two main factors make people could not spend

time

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on enjoying life with family. With these lifestyles, people become much

busy

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busier

and cause many impacts to them. The

first

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effect is gapping between parents and children. When family members do not spend

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together, they could not have

chance

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a chance

the chance

to understand each other and

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they tend

to be disagree

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to disagree

in various cases. Another point is that their children might have negative

behaviors

manner of acting or controlling yourself

behaviours

. When parents do not spend

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for their kids, they will have much

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with their friends and

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they could learn bad things

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as

cheat

talk socially without exchanging too much information

chat

, play games or even nip.

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, spending less

time

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for family leads to many bad effects. In conclusion, working and studying are key implements for spending less

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for their

family which

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family, which

cause various effects for children

behaviors

manner of acting or controlling yourself

behaviour

and

relationship

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the relationship

between parents and kids. It would be necessary for humans to try to invest

time

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sharing difficulties and happiness with family members.