Some teachers think that international student exchange would be beneficial for all teenage school students. Do you think its advantages will outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, foreign exchanging programmes are hold popularly in many countries
by
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with
famous universities or even secondary and primary schools. Some teachers believe that these activities would bring for teenage school students advantages a great deal. Despite some drawbacks of
this
idea, I think that the benefits are more significant. On the one hand, there are two major disadvantages when teenage students decide to join in international
exchange
projects. In the
first
place, the drawback is
culture
shock. A teenager
go
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goes
to
a
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an
absolute strange place must be unfamiliar with the cultures and beliefs. By the
first
time living there, they will miss understanding and tension when communicate with foreigners. They
can not
can not
cannot
concentrate on their studies.
For instance
, they will not suit each other and make
culture
conflicts in eating, sleeping, listening music habits. The religions are different like
Buddism
a religion represented by the many groups (especially in Asia) that profess various forms of the Buddhist doctrine and that venerate Buddha
Buddhism
in Asia, Mohammedanism in Africa, Catholicism in Europe, Hinduism in India will become a big obstacle, too. Another disadvantage is that many students are unable to follow international learning programmes, leading to undesirable academic outcomes. Some of my friends,
for example
, have to re-sit the exams or have difficulties catching up with their lectures due to poor language skills.
On the other hand
,
firstly
,
exchange
students
are given
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is given
the opportunity to meet different people from all over the world and learn a range of skills that they might not have a chance to learn if studying in their country.
For instance
, they can develop their social skills by sharing experience with other
exchange
students and get a deeper knowledge into the
culture
by immersing themselves in the local community. Another benefit is that living in a different country helps
exchange
students become more independent.
This
is because without daily support from their parents, these students have to learn to cook, clean, manage their budgets and make their own decisions. All in all,
although
exchange
students might have difficulties in adapting to the new
culture
and following international school curriculums, I believe that the benefits of international
exchange
programmes do outweigh those drawbacks.
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