many countries experiencing population growth and need more homes. should these new homes be constructed in existing cities or should new towns be built in the countryside?

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Population in the worldwide have been
incrasing
becoming greater or larger
increasing
day by day, many countries build more resident is
necessity
Suggestion
a necessity
. Some people think these
house
Suggestion
houses
should be created in the
city
, while others believe that new towns should created in the out of
town
. In the wake of population increase, many countries are facing more dense in the
city
center
an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centre
. If the new towns build in the countryside, there would be some
benifits
financial assistance in time of need
benefits
.
For example
,
countryside
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the countryside
have
Suggestion
has
more landscape can be constructed,
this
means if a new
town
is created here, it
can be accommodate
Suggestion
can accommodate
for more and more citizens.
Additionally
, urban planning will be more
optumize
make optimal; get the most out of; use best
optimized
, because it is unlike the developed
city
all the things had already created. The government can plan how to build up the
town
completely. The best example is they can create a
town
with many
infrastructure
Suggestion
infrastructures
,
such
as
community
Suggestion
community centres
community centre
a community centre
center
, sports
center
an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centre
, and so on.
This
is
benefit
Suggestion
the benefit
for
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of
the citizens who live there, because the
town
is well developed and they will feel comfortable.
On the other hand
, there are
also
have some benefits for
house
Suggestion
a house
the house
is
build
Suggestion
built
in the
city
center
an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centre
.
For instance
, it is more convenient for people go to work. In
gerneral
applying to all or most members of a category or group
general
, there is not so far distance to go everywhere if someone lives in the
center
an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centre
. It is
also
more public transports and high frequency service in the transportation.
Moreover
, people will have more job opportunities. The evidence
is many major
Suggestion
is in many major
cooporations
a business firm whose articles of incorporation have been approved in some state
corporations
are
also
locate
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located
at
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in
the
center
an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centre
, so people can get
the high pay job
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a higher paying job
the high paying job
higher paying jobs
higher paying job
higher pay job
easier. In conclusion.
Although
new
homes construct
Accept comma addition
homes, construct
in the
city
center
an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centre
is convenient for work and get more job opportunities,
however
, I strongly believe that new
town
should be created in the out of
town
that the
city
will be well developed by government and it will
be hold
see with attention
behold
a
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an
extra number of people.
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  • Infrastructure
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  • Overcrowding
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  • Greener living spaces
  • Economic boost
  • Public services
  • Planned communities
  • Housing affordability
  • Social cohesion
  • Amenities
  • Cultural integration
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