Under British and Australian laws a jury in a criminal case has no access to information about the defendant's past criminal record. This protects the person who is being accused of the crime. Some lawyers have suggested that this practice should be changed and that a jury should be given all the past facts before they reach their decision about the case. Do you agree or disagree?

The discussion
on
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at
hand is about
past records
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the past records
of a criminal being available to the jury or not. I disagree with the current law of protecting the criminal. In my opinion humans are primordial by nature and a lot is said about them from
there
of them or themselves
their
line of ancestry and previous
behaviors
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
patterns which some studies say that sometimes is part of their DNA. To be able to fully justify the verdict on a case,
jury
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the jury
needs to confirm if the criminal is committing crimes out of habit. The said technique may able to bring forth a
behavior
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
pattern in case of one and justice be provided according to the criminal history. It could be possible that the criminal needs mental help more than being put in a correction facility or worse. I understand that the judgement could be
colored
rid of objects or obstructions such as e.g. trees and brush
cleared
coloured
on
basis
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the basis
of the history of the
person but
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person, but
that brings me to question my faith in the jurors which I do not want to do. No citizen should have to question the integrity of their judicial system. I would rather believe in their objectivity and sense of justice to provide a judgement to the criminal as necessary or required. Think of
this
in
this
way, when we buy a product sometimes we are so brand specific because we know that the brand ensures a certain quality level and has been around in the market for a long time. So, we know that what we are putting are money on is sound.
hence
(used to introduce a logical conclusion) from that fact or reason or as a result
Hence
the idea that the
criminal's
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criminal
past record being known is like knowing how long and true
this
person
has been in the past and if the
person
requires something more than just being let go
in
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into
the society once again, prison or some other facility to help the cause of
this
person
.
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