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Some people believe that we cannot learn anything from the past for our life today, while others believe that history is a valuable source of information to understand human's life.

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History
 is believed as a valuable source of knowledge for human beings, human is always to
searching
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search
be searched
 for many mysteries in the past.
However
, it has sparked
an
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a
 heated debate that whether
history
 is meaningless or it is
informative origin
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the informative origin
an informative origin
 for studying about human's life. From my perspective,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
 strongly believe that
history
 is the key to
find
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finding
 out
human's many enduring questions
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the human's many enduring questions
. In
this
 essay,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
 am going to give
the the
definite article
the
 author's standpoint and prove it
by
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with
 examples, In
term
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terms
 of the benefits that
history
 is
bringing
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brought
 to our today's development, learning about the past help people to find the right solution for their
future
 decision. Thereon, by revising the actions of people in the past, people nowadays could
learning
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learn
 from these decisions and results and integrate it to the contemporary problem, A good example of
this
 is General Vo Nguyen Giap who commanded the Dien Bien Phu war against French. His winning resolution is derived from the profound strategy which he learned from his ancestors in many previous
war
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wars
 of resistances, The past may have the potential utilization for us to foresee our
future
,
Nevertheless
,
history
 is of the paramount importance to human to show their respects for the sacrifice of their ancestors.
On
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In
For
 historical perspective, the number of people who died in the battleground is huge, the consequence of wars
in
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on
 our planet has remained until now. With a view to learning from what we have lost in the
past we
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past, we
 may find
history
 is becoming indispensable,
This
 has been proved through several
action
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actions
 of building monuments and specific cemeteries of whom are killed in the wars.
Therefore
,
human
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humans
a human
 would never stop to find out every outlook details in the past, In conclusion, it never be a waste of time learning our
history
, In some ways,
history
 could lead us to the answers for our
future
, it
also
 a gift to remember so as to look through our past generations's achievements. In the
future
 there would be more shocking research which
reveal
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reveals
 the mysteries in
history
.
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