Higher education could be funded in three ways. All costs paid bygovernment, all costs paid by students or students paying all costs through agovernment loan. What are the advantages of these choices?

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funding benefits
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university
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students and
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a whole
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parties should bear some of the
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of
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educations.
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students gain
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personal and economic benefits
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of
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attending university
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,
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also
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benefits by having a more
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educated population
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, it is important that all members of
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have
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the opportunity
to attend
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regardless of wealth. In
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various models
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places will be discussed.There is little doubt that people who attend
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usually benefit
throughhigher
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through higher
salaries and greater opportunities. It is
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reasonable that
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society expects
students to make some contribution to the
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of their
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, expecting students to fully fund their own
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may
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cause students
to avoid courses that lead to less well-paying jobs
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as the sciences
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nursing and teaching.
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as a whole
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benefits from having a more educated community
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and should
support people who make an effort to become educated. It is
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therefore reasonable
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provide money for
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places
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particularly when the
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of doing a course or the return for
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them from completing a course
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needed by
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.The funding model
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used for
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placements is
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very
importantas
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important as
governments have a responsibility to provide an opportunity for
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all members
of
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to attend
university
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. Deferred repayment of fees
throughlow
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through low
cost
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loans and the partial subsidising of
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courses by
governmentare
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the government are
government are
effective methods of ensuring fairer access to
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education
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sincethey
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since they
allow people to pay for their
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when they are
best
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better
able to
affordto
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afford to
.In summary,
university
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education
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benefits
both
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individuals and
society
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andboth
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and both
governments and individuals who receive a
university
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education
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shouldmake
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should make
a contribution to the costs of tertiary
education
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.
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, it
isimportant
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is important
that appropriate loan schemes are in place to ensure that access
touniversity
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to university
is available to all members of
society
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.

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