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Most people prefer ready to eat food outside of their home rather than homemade food nowadays. Do you think this has more advantages or disadvantages?

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Nowadays, People are changing so rapidly in terms of their habits. Many of them now working on
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 mode. So,
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 on their
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 habits. Todays generation prefers outside
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 rather than home
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 stuff because it provides them at a variety of
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 and
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 it does not require any time to cook. They simply one click away for a meal and
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 chains serve them in just few minutes great meal on their doorstep. In urban areas or big cities, people
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 as technocrats, working professional, students etc. Always choose a street meal to stop their craving or refuel themselves for a short span. Many people are in favour of outside
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 because they don't have an option for cooking due to their busy schedule or working commitments, but
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, some people not to support
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 culture they have their own reasons like outside meal not good for health for a long period of life. If they consume outside
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 regularly they could get face difficulties in a longer run
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 as acidity, constipation, Bowel diseases etc. As far as I am concerned, I am fully in the support for outside snack. In today scenario many people are working in big cities and most of us are coming from smaller cities. It is so much difficult for all the working professional to maintain an equilibrium. Another reason many meal outlets provide lucrative foodstuff offers,
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 one reason young generation does not resist themselves in order. Some people consider it burden to cook
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 for themselves and it is time consuming too. So, they simply save that space and put
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 point to some productive activity.
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Moreover, many
 world renowned
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 chains are
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 business and open their
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 outlets in India to attract the young generation. To conclude, if you are busy and do not know how to cook
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 in that case you have plenty of options of foodstuff.
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, still you have to think before placing an order to yourself for something good and healthy.

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