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In many countries, fast food is becoming cheaper and more widely available. Do the disadvantages of this outweigh the advantages?

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Nowadays, in most of countries, instant
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 trend is rapidly growing because of it"s inexpensiveness and wide range of availability.
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, junk
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 is a risk for communicable diseases due to busiest lifestyle in modern society people are used to it. Today,
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 unhealthy
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 style is a severe threat to the community because of it"s numerous disadvantages. One evident drawback in having snack
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 is, the obvious risk of communicable diseases.
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 as, cancer, diabetes mellitus and obesity. Novel health statistics are revealing not only children, but
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 adults are suffering from the above diseases due to
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 inappropriate
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 style. Unhealthy
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 is very delicious, attractive and sweeten than healthy
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 prepared at home. Due to that, kids are more prone to having them.
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, it is a
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 of wasting money.
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, it is cheaper, when we spend daily, it accumulates a lot.
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, there are some advantages in junk
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.
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, Potato chips, roasted chicken, frozen
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 and canned
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 is very cheaper than healthy meal.
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, homemade rice and curry. Due to it"s low cost any level of family group could buy it at any place. Currently, all the family members, including father, mother and even children are in a race. All of them are busy and they do not have time to prepare meals.
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, snack
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 is very easier
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 to them than spend time for cooking. Today, junk
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 is famous among the people because it is ready made and low cost.
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, it creates a human being unhealthy for a long term and even medicines are unavailable for those diseases. It is not a good habit to have
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a light informal meal
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 whether it is easy or not. We have to change our lifestyles into the healthy
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way, if
 we want to live long being healthy.
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