In many countries, good schools and medical facilities are available only in cities. Some people think new teachers and doctors should be required to work in rural areas for a few years, but others think everyone should be free to choose where they work. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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a lack of good educational institutions and health care facilities in the

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, it is suggested that newly graduated

teachers

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and

doctors

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should be sent to these

areas

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for several years.

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some

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disagree with

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idea, I believe it is reasonable to require fresh graduates to spend a period of time working in rural

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. On the one hand, some

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say that new

teachers

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and

doctors

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should be able to decide where they

work

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. The first reason is that everyone has the right to choose a workplace that they feel comfortable with.

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, many graduates want to live and

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in a place

that is

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close to their family.

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, we cannot force new

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and

doctors

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to move to the

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against their will. Another reason is that if all new

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and

doctors

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are forced to

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in rural

areas

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, these occupations would become less attractive.

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, fewer students would choose to become

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and

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in the future.

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, I believe it is a great idea to send these new graduates to the

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for a few years.

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, as rural

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are having

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a serious lack of facilities, the arrival of well-trained

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and

doctors

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would provide better education and health care services.

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would significantly enhance local

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's living

standard

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.

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,

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policy is

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likely to play an important role in preventing rural inhabitants from moving to big cities in search of schools and medical facilities. As a result, we can avoid overpopulation in large urban

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.

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, since there is a lack of workforce in the

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, it is

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a great opportunity for newly graduated

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and

doctors

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to practise and gain more practical experience. In conclusion,

while

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many

people

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believe new

teachers

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and

doctors

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should be given the right to choose their workplace, I would argue that they should be required to

work

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in the

countryside

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for a period of time