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Today's teenagers have more stressful lives than previous generations. Discuss this view and give your own opinion.

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Many people believe that nowadays, the young
generation
 has mush more
stress
 in their life
then
 any other
generation
. I oppose the view and my reasons will be explained in the following paragraphs. It is true that young people now have lots of
stress
 and it is really common in every country in the World. I think,
stress
 is everywhere, young people have to solve so many tasks
such
 as finish the school, graduate from the university and find a job.
On the other hand
, we can see that all previous generations had these problems as well, it is not something new. I think, there were generations with bigger amount of weight,
for example
, people who was born before the big depression in the United States.I personally believe, they had much more
stress
 during their life, it was a hard time for all people. I strongly believe tat all generations have the same problem only the environment is different. Of course, every
generation
 thinks they are different, but as we can see in history it is not really true. To repeat it short, every
generation
 has some
stress
 and problems, but today it is not the hardest time in the human history. I think, in former
days
Suggestion
day
 humans had a hard life and amount of the
stress
 was much bigger.
Submitted by Irina on

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