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Today's teenagers have more stressful lives than previous generations. Discuss this view and give your own opinion.

#teenagers #lives #generations
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Many people believe that nowadays, the young
generation
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 has mush more
stress
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 in their life
then
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 any other
generation
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. I oppose the view and my reasons will be explained in the following paragraphs. It is true that young people now have lots of
stress
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 and it is really common in every country in the World. I think,
stress
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 is everywhere, young people have to solve so many tasks
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 as finish the school, graduate from the university and find a job.
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, we can see that all previous generations had these problems as well, it is not something new. I think, there were generations with bigger amount of weight,
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, people who was born before the big depression in the United States.I personally believe, they had much more
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 during their life, it was a hard time for all people. I strongly believe tat all generations have the same problem only the environment is different. Of course, every
generation
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 thinks they are different, but as we can see in history it is not really true. To repeat it short, every
generation
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 has some
stress
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 and problems, but today it is not the hardest time in the human history. I think, in former
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 humans had a hard life and amount of the
stress
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 was much bigger.
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