Cycling is more environmentally friendly than other forms of transport. Why is it not popular in many places? How can its popularity be increased?

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These
day
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days
, many people are convinced that riding a bike
is consider
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is considered
as one of the least polluted vehicles. In the following essay, some reasons will be evaluated to explain why
this
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way of transport is not prevalent in some Areas as well as recommend some solutions to increase its
popularity
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First
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and foremost, I would discuss about reason why its
popularity
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are becoming
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is becoming
less and less in some cities. The main reason is that high pressure from higher quality of life in some big cities makes dwellers feel exhausted and want to follow the sedentary lifestyles.
As a result
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, they have
tendency
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a tendency
to commute by bus or other public transportation that give them a time to put their mind at ease while going to work. In America, almost permanent residents living in the
suburbs
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suburb
commute to their offices by buses or passenger cars. Another factor worth mentioning is that cycling is not a good way for people to show their
wealthy
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wealth
and social position. In recent years, many people think that gadgets that cost a fortune would embody their
selfhood
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and identity.
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,
bike’s
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the bike’s popularity
popularity
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has declined significantly because of its inexpensive price. According to Dantrinew.
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in Vietnam, it indicates that more than 60% citizens
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is stable income possessed
having stable income possess
their own cars and very few of them make a habit of cycling every day.
On the other hand
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, I think some measure should be taken into consideration.
First
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of all, government
construct
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constructs
some bike land that
encourage
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encourages
commuters cycling to
works
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work
or going for a picnic. In Amsterdam, Holland,
for example
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,
government
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the government
had paid up to 390 million USD to ride
land infrastructure
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land, infrastructure
with the aim of attracting to 200000 people going to their offices by bikes in 2016,
however
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, the result was beyond expectation. What is more, some campaigns should be organised by like-minded groups or environmentalists to raise people’s awareness about the role of bikes. Many developed countries have applied
this
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strategy and gain considerable success. From what I have discussed before, I want to draw a conclusion that cycling has become less prevalent in our society, and each
individuals
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individual
should have responsibility for increasing its
popularity
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in the near future.
Submitted by Andy on

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