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Many scientists believe that now we can study the behavior of a three-year-old child to see whether they will grow up to be criminals. To what extent do you think crime is determined by human nature？ Is it possible to stop children from growing up to be criminals?

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Around the globe, Genetic Science has been developing at an alarming rate. Some sections of the society believe that criminal nature can be found in a toddler;
however
, others oppose it.
This
 essay will discuss criminal
behavior
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
, and possibilities to prevent young ones from getting stuck into
this
 world of
crime
.
undoubtedly
Suggestion
Undoubtedly
,
crime
 is a shiny
world attracting
Accept comma addition
world, attracting
 everyone towards; but a child`s nature can not predict his fate. Education is
first
 main component to shape someone`s future.
professionalism
Suggestion
Professionalism
 of tutor and educational institute provides a
children
Suggestion
child
 with
displanery
relating to discipline in behavior
disciplinary
 and vital
characterstics
a prominent attribute or aspect of something
characteristics
characteristic
 for
upcoimg
of the relatively near future
upcoming
 life, and by dealing with peers, they learn to be a social animal.
For example
, a recent survey found in
USA majority
Suggestion
the USA majority
 of the criminals
have
Suggestion
has
 no education. Culture have
significent role
Suggestion
a significant role
significant role
 to play in any society, and some cultures are proven to be more violent
then
conjunction used in comparatives
than
 others. Early development of a minor is
infulenced
a power to affect persons or events especially power based on prestige etc
influenced
 by lifestyle of people around him
(
Accept space
(
for
e
objective form of "I"
me
.g.
parents
Suggestion
Parents
, relatives) which decides
actions
Suggestion
the actions
 of young one later in life.
Moreover
, governments and development of a country
indirecty contributes
Suggestion
indirectly contribute
indirectly contributes
to push
Suggestion
to pushing
 someone towards
crime
.
For example
, developing and undeveloped nations have higher
crime
 rates because of
relative
Suggestion
relatively
 higher unemployment rates. To conclude, human behaviour is shaped by the education and
enviornment
Suggestion
the environment
environment
 around him. It is impossible to predict someone`s future and these
sort
Suggestion
sorts
 of Predictions increases problems in
youngsters
Suggestion
youngster's
 life.
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