Many people find it difficult to speak in front of and to present to any audience. It is believed that this skill should be taught in school.Why is this important? To what extent do you agree or disagree with it?

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Public speaking

skill

is really important in

this

modernized and westernized world

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It is said by some individuals that

this

quality should be taught to all the children at

young age

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a young age

so that they can survive in

this

highly competitive world. In my perspective, both parents and teachers should make efforts in order to enhance

this

skill

and my viewpoints on

this

issues

Suggestion

issue

will be elaborated in the aforementioned paragraphs. On the one hand, when children are young their learning capability is more so if they will be taught about

this

skill

then

children will become more confident and

fearlessly

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fearful

fearless

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For instance

, a survey was conducted in India in 2016 and its conclusion was that some of

schools

Suggestion

the schools

which lie in urban areas had involved children in various activities

such

as group discussions, debates and seminars and children from those schools were more confident as compared to other schools where children were not taught these things.

Furthermore

this

skill

is really important because it

boost

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boosts

the confidence of anyone and if anyone

have

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has

this

skill

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skill, then

then

he / she can opt several job perspective in

future

Suggestion

the future

which could become the source of earning money for them. To recapitulate, I would like to write that

people

Suggestion

person's

teacher should focus primarily on

this

skill

for the benefit of children in

future

Suggestion

the future

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Clear and correct grammar

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Many people find it difficult to speak in front of and to present to any audience. It is believed that this skill should be taught in school.Why is this important? To what extent do you agree or disagree with it?

Fully explain your ideas

You recently registered for a course and you cannot attend the class for some reasons. Write a letter to your course instructor, and in your letter Introduce yourself. Explain the situation. and say what action you would like to take.

People think that the best way to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentences. Others believe that there are other alternative solutions for reducing crime. Discuss both views and give your opinion on this topic

On a recent holiday, you lost a valuable item. Fortunately you have travel insurance to cover the cost of the lost item. Write a letter to the insurance manager. In your letter: describe the item you lost, explain how you lost it, tell the insurance company what you would like them to do.