Many people find it difficult to speak in front of and to present to any audience. It is believed that this skill should be taught in school.Why is this important? To what extent do you agree or disagree with it?

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Public speaking
skill
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is really important in
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modernized and westernized world
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It is said by some individuals that
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quality should be taught to all the children at
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a young age
so that they can survive in
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highly competitive world. In my perspective, both parents and teachers should make efforts in order to enhance
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skill
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and my viewpoints on
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issues
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issue
will be elaborated in the aforementioned paragraphs. On the one hand, when children are young their learning capability is more so if they will be taught about
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skill
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then
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children will become more confident and
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fearful
fearless
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, a survey was conducted in India in 2016 and its conclusion was that some of
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the schools
which lie in urban areas had involved children in various activities
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as group discussions, debates and seminars and children from those schools were more confident as compared to other schools where children were not taught these things.
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,
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skill
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is really important because it
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boosts
the confidence of anyone and if anyone
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has
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skill
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skill, then
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he / she can opt several job perspective in
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the future
which could become the source of earning money for them. To recapitulate, I would like to write that
people
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person's
teacher should focus primarily on
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skill
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for the benefit of children in
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the future
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