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Some people say that in order to be happy, you must have a job you love doing. Others say that other factors are more important. Do you think that people can only be happy if they have a job they really enjoy?

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Some people think that we can only be happy if we have an occupation we desire, while the others believe that other factors are far more vital. The question that happiness depends whether on favourite jobs or other factors
is
Suggestion
are
 controversial. Is it true that getting a desirable job is the key to happiness? It’s absolutely right that it meets our job satisfaction basing on working performances. No matter how is the salary, we still can get it raised even getting promoted when we devote to doing jobs that we have
passion
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a passion
 for.
However
, there are few cases of
exention
a mutually agreed delay in the date set for the completion of a job or payment of a debt
extension
 and these belong to the celebrities. Even though they have
successful career
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successful careers
a successful career
, they do not seem to be happy. In fact, they have to face with many unexpected
rumors
gossip (usually a mixture of truth and untruth) passed around by word of mouth
rumours
.
Moreover
, it’s really annoying when the journalists and
paparazzis
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paparazzi
 try to look for detailed information of their private lives which they’re unwilling to disclose to the public.
Therefore
, if happiness doesn’t depend on favourite occupations, what factors does it depend on? Generally, It’s probably money. With money, people can purchase things they love and enjoy
many services
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the many services
 like health care, education... Personally speaking, I’m delighted when doing things like hanging out with friends and travelling. In conclusion, I accept that enjoyable jobs may give us pleasure.
Nevertheless
,
this
 is not completely true as each job is greatly different. For most people, other factors are more significant.
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