Some people believe that everyone has a right to have access to university education and that governments should make it free for all students no matter what financial background they have. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, as higher education is believed to play a vital role in human’s greater achievement, more people would prefer their children to be entitled to university. It has been a matter of debate whether the authority should foster the free-college

policy

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in order to increase the number of

qualificated

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workforces. On the one hand, the provision of free-of-charge education could stem from the

socio

relating to human society and its members

social

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economy

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economic

economical

background and job-opportunity

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for

individuals. Most bachelor’s degree holders, especially the impoverished, will stand a better chance of enhancing their lives and their educational qualities.

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, abolishing tuition fee could result in the rise of

educated workforce

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an educated workforce

.

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means that the

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has constantly brought not only a thriving

economy but

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economy, but

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a civilized society

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In spite of the foretold merits, waiving tuition

potentially hinder

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potentially hinders

the economic growth from flourishing. The impact of the increasing university graduates gradually provokes the job market to become more

competive

involving competition or competitiveness

competitive

, even for job seekers with college qualification. On the other word, financial abundance and unhappiness have inexorably been acquired with

tertiary degree

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tertiary degrees

a tertiary degree

due to

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policy

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.

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, in Korea, qualification redundant has made the dwellers struggle against working pressure, which exaggerating the

suciding

coming after or following

succeeding

rate in

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country.

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but not least, as an amount of budgets will not be provided from

educational system

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the educational system

an educational system

educational systems

, free-college

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will put a strain on the government, leading to budget

dificits

an excess of liabilities over assets (usually over a certain period)

deficits

, reduced welfare among others. In conclusion, pursuing college without fee has shown its efficiency in encouraging young generations to attend higher education.

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, the

policy

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should not be generalized so as to maintain the advancement of the society.