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In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough  What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?

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Since the early ages, children are encouraged to be someone once they grow up, their parents teach them how to achieve anything using different methods. In some cultures, the
message
 is completely clear, you work hard,
then
 you can get anything you want.
However
, there are
advatages
the quality of having a superior or more favorable position
advantages
 and
disadadvantages
the quality of having an inferior or less favorable position
disadvantages
 when children are taught to try hard enough.  There are some disadvantages in place when teaching kids to try hard enough.
Although
this
message
 is short and clear, some kids do not have the knowledge and experience needed to understand what it really means. Children need to live their
life
 as simple as possible. They are only interested in playing and spending time with their friends.
As a result
, if a kid if told to try
hard
Suggestion
harder
, the
message
 might not be taken in the right way.
Furthermore
, children do not have
resposibilities
the social force that binds you to the courses of action demanded by that force
responsibilities
responsibility
 neither a job to apply
this
 approach.
Lastly
, I believe that there are more effective ways to achieve anything in
life
.
For example
, when children are taught to love what they do, they can achieve things throughout exploring their feelings.
However
, some cultures practice
this
 approach due to its
advatanges
the quality of having a superior or more favorable position
advantages
. Some people believe that children need to know how
hard is
Suggestion
hard life is
life
. If they know how to try hard since the early age, in the future they are likely to
do
engage in
make
 a big effort in order to achieve their goals.
This
message
 is proven to be effective, as it can work in any field.
For example
, children can try studying hard and
then
 get better grades at school.
Also
, they can try hard to save money, it could boost the sense of saving. In some cases, children that follow
this
message
 are more independent in their adult
life
 because they know what to do and how to perform to achieve
anythting
an indefinite thing
anything
 by themselves. In conclusion,
although
 children might not have the
approppriate
suitable for a particular person or place or condition etc
appropriate
 knowledge to
cath
discover or come upon accidentally, suddenly, or unexpectedly; catch somebody doing something or in a certain state
catch
cut
this
message
 correctly, teaching them to try hard enough might have some
positives
Suggestion
positive
 outcomes in their future.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • achieve
  • try hard
  • positive mindset
  • self-belief
  • motivates
  • ambitious goals
  • resilience
  • determination
  • confidence
  • self-esteem
  • growth mindset
  • unrealistic expectations
  • disappointment
  • failure
  • effort
  • hard work
  • seek support
  • individual differences
  • abilities
  • capabilities
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