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The best way to ensure the growth of children is to make parents take parenting courses. (Do you agree or disagree?)

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It is generally assumed that participating in parenting course is the optimum way for their children’s development. Despite the fact that these
course
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courses
 can bring some advantages, I completely disagree with
this
 notion and there are some different methods for parents. Making
moms
informal term for a mother
mums
 and dads undertake parenting classes is not feasible.
Firstly
, it is hard for some working parents or single parents to make ends meet, let
alone to spend money
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alone spend money
 on
such
 courses. Fathers and mothers, who struggle financially, often take more than 9 hours in their companies.
Therefore
, there is no time left for them to
joining
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join
 classes that many occupy a large fraction in their busy schedule.
Moreover
, it is ridiculous to force parents taking part in
such
 courses
instead
 of
let
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letting
 them
making
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make
 their own decision. No lessons can be efficient if the participants are not willing to acquire it. From my perspective, there are
also
 some methods for busy parents to improve their childcare. The most popular way is seeking their needed documents online.
WIth
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With
 the assistance of the INternet, parents can easily assimilate not only theoretical
knowledge but
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knowledge, but
 videos and advices from professional as well.
For example
, there are many groups about
childcare
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child care
 in renowned social networking sites that usually update the news and most effective technique about raising and educating a kid.
Moreover
, parents can learn from their predecessors who are full of experience. It is advantageous for them to have
be
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been
 able to have a good grasp of practical information which may
be not available online
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not be available online
. In conclusion, despite some benefits that parenting courses provide, my firm belief is that
parent
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parents
a parent
 should have the right to make their own decision whether
thay
people in general
they
that
 underscore these classes.
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