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The best way to ensure the growth of children is to make parents take parenting courses. (Do you agree or disagree?)

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It is a controversial issue that attending the parenting courses is the best way to bring up children. In my point of view,
this
 argument can be quite biased for various reasons.
To begin
 with, in the word of work, parents are very busy because of their careers,
thus
, they
can not
can not
cannot
 spend their
freetime
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free time
 joining
parenting
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a parenting course
course
. Specifically, the teaching parent-
course
 are frequently
expensive so
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expensive, so
 many households do not
affort
be able to spare or give up
afford
effort
 to take
this
 type of
course
.
For example
, the total salary of all family members in 500 dollars, yet the
course
 fee
are
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is
 200-300 dollars, so they do not have much rest of money to prepare for
there
of them or themselves
their
 life.
Furthermore
, I believe that parenting instinct is always inside each of mother or father. It is
natural ability
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a natural ability
 which everyone can access when they are mature and have their own family.
Thus
, there is no need to
attending
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attend
useless parenting
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a useless parenting course
the useless parenting course
useless parenting courses
course
, it
just make
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just makes
 us waste money and time. No sooner had their baby been born than parents prepared enough essential skills by himself.
Last
 but not least, there are many fake courses to select and arrange people who are going to be parents. It is worth warning because of its hazardous points.
Finally
, if we need information and materials about parenting skills, we can search them on the Internet by technology devices or discuss with other on
websites
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the websites
. But we must take notes to select carefully truthful confirmed information. In conclusion, attending
parenting
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parenting courses
a parenting course
course
 may be
good but
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good, but
 unnecessary because of various
background
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backgrounds
, life condition, supporting of the Internet and ours initiate instinct.
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
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