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Some people believe that all teenagers should have to do unpaid work during their free time in order to help the local community. They think this would benefit the teenagers doing the unpaid work but also society as a whole. Do you agree or disagree?

#people #teenagers #work #time #community #society
When people
work
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work, then
then
 it teaches them a lot of things.It is said by some individuals that youngsters should do volunteer
work
 in their leisure time in order to help the
society
 and
this
 will benefit the
society
 as well as teenagers both. I totally agree with the aforementioned statement and my viewpoints will be elaborated in the upcoming paragraphs.
To begin
 with,
first
 advantage of involving teenagers in any
work
 is that it will keep them busy and they will not indulge themselves in bad activities
such
 as stealing
,
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,
 pornography and drug addiction
.
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.
For instance
, a survey was conducted in the year of 2016 in India and its result was that
fifty percent population
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the fifty percent population
 of youth in
metropolitican
relating to or characteristic of a metropolis
metropolitan
 cities is involved in drug addiction because of free time. So
,
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,
its
it is
it's
good way
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a good way
 to involve them in
work
. Another benefit of it is that it will make youngsters more strong and they will learn some of the qualities like cooperation, patience
,
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,
 problem solving skill which will really them in future for becoming successful
.
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.
Furthermore
,
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,
 when young people will indulge themselves in some of
work
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the work
 like educating the illiterate people from rural area, building public parks
,
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,
 planting trees
then
 it will bring happiness in the
society
. To recapitulate
,
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,
 I would like to write that it is a good idea to involve youngsters in the
work
 of
society
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the society
.
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