Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In recent years, developed countries have invested a huge amount of

money

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in the developing countries to help them solve public's financial problems in those countries. But unfortunately, it seems that those

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money

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monies

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unable to solve poverty in poor countries.

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, rich countries should try out to find a new way to help poor countries

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of solving the financial aid. I totally agree with the idea that finding new types of help to the harder countries.

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of all, the developed countries

can not

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know clearly about the uses of their

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, where they go to and what they are used for. To be more specific, in some countries, the invested

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is taken for unacceptable purpose,

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like gambling or embezzlement. In a short amount of time, the public property will rapidly run out.

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, there will totally no chance to solve poverty if that situation continues increase.

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, when the developing countries received the supporting

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, they will have an emotion, that they can be dependent on those

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monies

and no longer need to develop their economies and productions. There is no conclusive evidence to prove that those thoughts are correct. A

people

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person

, an organization or a country,

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needs

to work hard and do not rely on others or things. For that reason, developing countries should stand on their

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feet

and find out solutions to increase productions and economy developing.

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, they can make a request to developed countries for helping

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technology and industry and

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using those

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advices

and help to apply in the factories or fabrics. More giant companies like Apple, Samsung or Amazon should

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encourage to place factories or stores in developing countries to help some old one catch up with the latest technologies and the modern world. In conclusion, it is necessary to find new

ways helping

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ways, helping

the indigent countries rather than just the financial problems. The

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, which is invested, should be used in the suitable purposes and bring advantages to the society and as well, the government in these lands should learn how to be independent and have courage to boost up the countries.