The only way to reduce the amount of traffic in cities today is by reducing the need for people to travel from home for work, education or shopping. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

These days, the

traffic

jam is one the topical issues in many countries.

Thus

, it is suggested that people’s demand for travelling to

work

, school and shop store, should be reduced. To

larger extent

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a larger extent

, I disagree with

this

statement.

To begin

with, if people commence working and studying remotely, it can encourage a sedentary lifestyle in people, the effects of which will damage their health.

Besides

, for some employees and students, it can be challenging to

gully

to the greatest degree or extent; completely or entirely; ('full' in this sense is used as a combining form)

fully

concentrate on their

work

and studies, because of home distractions.

For example

, students, which study remotely, cannot fully focus on online lecture and actively interact due to a constant interruption of

other

any of various alternatives; some other

another

family member and noise of household equipment. For

this

reason, people should continue

work

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working

and study at their offices and universities in face-to-face format.

Furthermore

, in order to reduce the

traffic

volume in big cities, governments may renovate public transportation system and encourage citizens to use public transports,

such

as buses, trains and subways.

In addition

, individuals can cycle to their workplaces and schools, since riding a bicycle can improve people’s health and reduce the

traffic

.

For instance

, 60% of

population

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the population

in Dania use bicycles to reach their destinations. Because they are attempting to avoid

traffic

jam and the stress related to

this

. In conclusion,

although

some assume that demand for travelling to

work

, school and shopping, should be diminished to reduce the

traffic

in cities, I argue that

this

approach may have a negative impact on the health of people as it leads to sedentary behaviour. Meanwhile, there are certain measures, which can assist to decrease the

traffic

jam.