The only way to reduce the amount of traffic in cities today is by reducing the need for people to travel from home for work, education or shopping. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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These days, the
traffic
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jam is one the topical issues in many countries.
Thus
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, it is suggested that people’s demand for travelling to
work
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, school and shop store, should be reduced. To
larger extent
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a larger extent
, I disagree with
this
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statement.
To begin
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with, if people commence working and studying remotely, it can encourage a sedentary lifestyle in people, the effects of which will damage their health.
Besides
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, for some employees and students, it can be challenging to
gully
to the greatest degree or extent; completely or entirely; ('full' in this sense is used as a combining form)
fully
concentrate on their
work
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and studies, because of home distractions.
For example
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, students, which study remotely, cannot fully focus on online lecture and actively interact due to a constant interruption of
other
any of various alternatives; some other
another
family member and noise of household equipment. For
this
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reason, people should continue
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work
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working
and study at their offices and universities in face-to-face format.
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, in order to reduce the
traffic
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volume in big cities, governments may renovate public transportation system and encourage citizens to use public transports,
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as buses, trains and subways.
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, individuals can cycle to their workplaces and schools, since riding a bicycle can improve people’s health and reduce the
traffic
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.
For instance
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, 60% of
population
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the population
in Dania use bicycles to reach their destinations. Because they are attempting to avoid
traffic
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jam and the stress related to
this
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. In conclusion,
although
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some assume that demand for travelling to
work
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, school and shopping, should be diminished to reduce the
traffic
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in cities, I argue that
this
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approach may have a negative impact on the health of people as it leads to sedentary behaviour. Meanwhile, there are certain measures, which can assist to decrease the
traffic
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jam.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Commuting patterns
  • Remote work
  • Telecommuting
  • E-learning platforms
  • E-commerce
  • Urban planning
  • Public transportation
  • Infrastructure development
  • Green spaces
  • Pedestrianization
  • Carbon footprint
  • Sustainable living
  • Carpooling
  • Cycle lanes
  • Mixed-use development
  • Teleconference
  • Urban sprawl
  • Zoning regulations
  • Traffic congestion
  • City logistics
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