Some people from poor and rural backgrounds find it difficult to get a university education. Universities have to make it easier, especially for such groups, to get into them. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Education

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makes a person civilized

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cultured and

polished but

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polished, but

everyone can not get

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university

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a university education

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because

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it is

it's

very expensive

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It is said by some individuals that universities should find some ways and methods so that individuals who came from rural environment can get

university

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education

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I totally agree with

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statement and my viewpoints on

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issue will be elaborated in aforementioned paragraphs.

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with, children who lives in rural areas are unable to join

university

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because there parents are not willing to send their children in

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for

further

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education

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because of their orthodox thinking so universities should arrange some campaign in rural areas in order to guide people about

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education

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break the orthodox thinking of the people.

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universities should

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fix the rural quota of

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in which special seats should be reserved for those who come from

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a rural background

rural backgrounds

. Universities should

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give

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a reward

to students in the form of scholarship

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will give encouragement to many students who are going

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university

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education

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, special fee concession should be given to students who belongs to rural environment so that they can take

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university

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. To recapitulate

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I would like to write that all the people have the right to get

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education

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an education

. So universities should make some efforts to make

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affordable.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

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Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Task Achievement: 4.0

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