Some people from poor and rural backgrounds find it difficult to get a university education. Universities have to make it easier, especially for such groups, to get into them. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Education

makes a person civilized

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cultured and

polished but

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polished, but

everyone can not get

university

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a university education

education

because

its

it is

it's

very expensive

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It is said by some individuals that universities should find some ways and methods so that individuals who came from rural environment can get

university

education

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I totally agree with

this

statement and my viewpoints on

this

issue will be elaborated in aforementioned paragraphs.

To begin

with, children who lives in rural areas are unable to join

university

because there parents are not willing to send their children in

university

for

further

education

because of their orthodox thinking so universities should arrange some campaign in rural areas in order to guide people about

university

education

break the orthodox thinking of the people.

Furthermore

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universities should

also

fix the rural quota of

education

in which special seats should be reserved for those who come from

rural background

Suggestion

a rural background

rural backgrounds

. Universities should

also

give

reward

Suggestion

a reward

to students in the form of scholarship

this

will give encouragement to many students who are going

for

Suggestion

university

education

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Moreover

, special fee concession should be given to students who belongs to rural environment so that they can take

education

university

. To recapitulate

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I would like to write that all the people have the right to get

education

Suggestion

an education

. So universities should make some efforts to make

education

affordable.

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