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More and more people want to buy famous brands ofclothes, carsand other items. What are the reasons? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

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In most of the modern country, some
peope
(plural) any group of human beings (men or women or children) collectively
people
 love to buy popular brands of everything,
such
 as vehicle, clothes...
etc.
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Etc.
 I think
this
 is negatives outweigh the benefits. In
this
 essay, I will discuss the reason why people like to buy
thing
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the thing
things
 with famous brands and give my own opinions. In many well
develop
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developed
developing
 countries, some people earn much more money.
This
make
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makes
 them have an ability to buy something with brands. The reason
of
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for
 many people
love
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loves
 to purchases these
thing
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things
 because the company which create a
brand
 is
also
have
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having
 a high quality with it,
that is
why
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why, although
although
 these things usually in a higher price, but people are more willing to
purchases
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purchase
 these things.
For example
, some famous
brand
 cars,
such
 as Maserati, Ferrari, BMW, and so on. Despite the prices are so high,
however
 many people desire to
having
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have
 on their owns. It is because these cars are
also
 having the great quality and the highest standard.
On the other hand
,
although
 the
brand
 product
have
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has
 the great quality, there
also
 have some drawbacks. Some people desire to have a
brand
 product because they can
show
 off how much wealth they are, and to gain the
sence
a general conscious awareness
sense
 of superiority.
For instance
, some people buy a bag with a famous
brand
, and they can
show
 off
with
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to
 their friends,
consequently
, they can
show
 an ability to buy
this
 bag because of they have much more money.
This
 means they can
satisfied
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satisfy
 the vanity. In conclusion, despite of those products have
the higher
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the highest
standerd
a basis for comparison; a reference point against which other things can be evaluated
standard
standards
 with it. I strongly believe that the disadvantages
is
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are
 more than the advantages because of some people just want to
show
 off their wealth.
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