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Some older people struggle with the use of modern electronic technology such as smartphones, computers. What are the reasons and give your solutions

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In
this
 modern era technology has changed the world. It is said by some individuals that elderly people face problem of using electronic gadgets like smartphones and computers. There are numerous reasons behind it
.
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.
I will elaborate my viewpoints in the upcoming paragraphs.
To begin
 with,
first
 and foremost reason is that old people
are depended
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are depending
have depended
depend
 on others for learning the features of
electronics so
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electronics, so
 they become reluctant to learn
those
plural of "this"
these
 things from their children because these days generally children do not live with them. Another reason is that some of the elderly people do not like to
use
 new electronic because they have difficulties in assessing the complicated features of new equipments and
lot
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a lot
 of patience
,
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,
hardwork
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hard work
 is required for getting knowledge of
latest electronics
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the latest electronics
. A survey was conducted in India in which it was estimated that 50 percent of elderly people are unable to learn new electronics because they live alone and they
can not
can not
cannot
 find the right sources getting
education
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an education
 about new
euipments
an instrumentality needed for an undertaking or to perform a service
equipments
apartments
.
On the other hand
, there are some solutions of these problems. Elderly people should be motivated by their children to
use
 these latest equipments and they should spend some free time with parents so that they can learn these new things
.
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Another solution is that some trained people should be hired by them so that they can learn the ways of operating the difficult features of mobile phones and smartphones.
Furthermore
, elderly people who
use
 new
electronics
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electronic
 should be appreciated and rewarded by society it will definitely inspire others. To recapitulate, I would like to write that nothing is impossible in
this
 world. Old people should be guided by others with patience which will help them to
use
 these electronics.
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