Some people believe that electronic calculators should not be allowed in school until after the pupils have mastered metal arithmetic. Others believe that calculators save pupils time, especially with complicated calculations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Thank to scientific and technical progress, people’ life
become
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becomes
faster and easier. It is considered by some that allowing students to
use
electronic calculators at school while there are others who think it is better to master mental arithmetic before they get
permit
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permission
to
use
calculators. In my view,
i
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I
would rather
having
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have
basic skills
on
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in
of
at
for
to
solving mathematic problem. On the one hand, using calculators at school has some benefits for several reasons. When calculators are accepted
to
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for
use
, students can save their time in solving complicated calculations.
In addition
, the accuracy of the calculators is higher compared to calculating on their own.
For instance
, what if the pupils know how to solve the algebra
question but
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question, but
they make
mistake
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mistakes
in a multiplication.
Thus
, their scores are lower even they lose opportunity to enter to good
shools
an educational institution
schools
soils
sales
and companies.
On the other hand
,
permiting
consent to, give permission
permitting
schoolers to
use
calculator too early decreases their mental arithmetic skills. In primary school, almost calculations related to
simply
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simple
addition, subtraction, multiplication and share calculation. It is not necessary to
use
calculator. In some situations where calculators are not available, the
students’brain
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students’ brain
will work efficiently to lead to
conclusion
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the conclusion
a conclusion
conclusions
. It
also
trains pupils a logical thinking and flexibility in dealing with issues in daily life. For the reasons mentioned above, I believe that calculators should not be allowed in schools
until
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by
students can understand how
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formulas
familiar
work.Calculators are not the answer to every problem, it is still possible if you press the wrong button. Students should not overused calculators as an alternative for using their brains.
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