Some people believe that we should not study history , as it has little or nothing to tell us . Do you agree or disagree.

History is a primary subject that reveals

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our past and our ancestors, but a few individuals argue that history should not be studied because it has a minor effect on our future and our lives. In my opinion, I disagree with the aforementioned statement because it tells us about our past and

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to remember our values, so it is fairly important to be studied.

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a logical conclusion.

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with, history has all aspects of knowledge

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related to our past

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how

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human

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development

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and discovered everything.

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, there are plenty of books and journals which were written on human development and

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us full knowledge about all ages

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how

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mankind

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change

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over the ages.

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, the subject studied in the schools has

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information pack about human development.

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, it has the full material about our past heroes who sacrificed their lives for our nation, when one is reading about them that how they gave their lives for their nation's freedom.

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readers know their values and duties about

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humanity.

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, in India,

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class's historical subject is all about their freedom fighter heroes, and children get all

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about them from it. In conclusion,

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the topic is important, which would be compulsory for our generation to know about our past, so they know their values and morals for their life. It would not be ignored

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our society as

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trash.

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Aug 24, 2020

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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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historical knowledge
economic crises
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cultural evolution
community bonds
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Some people believe that we should not study history , as it has little or nothing to tell us . Do you agree or disagree.

In the future nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying.

In some places old age is valued, while in other cultures youth is considered more important. Discuss both view and give your own opinion.

Some people think that the best way to increase road safety is to increase the minimum legal age for driving cars or riding motorbikes To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Living in a country when you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious serius social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extents do you agree or disagree with this statement?