Some people think that schools should reward students with the best academic results, while others believe it is more important to reward students who show improvement. To what extent, do you agree or disagree?

While it is believed that rewards should be

given individuals who

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given to individuals who

excel at school, I would argue that it is better for schools to reward those who make progress. It is clear that why some people side

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by

offering rewards the best results students only. The reason is that the elite students have applied themselves to reach top performance, so it is sensible that their efforts earn them the privileges over those with lesser scores.

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,

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suggestion may have

negative impact

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a negative impact

on other students. Because only small students can top the exams, others would feel lack motivation and become discouraged. In the long run,

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may lead to the deterioration of the overall performance of the school.

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of the mentioned approach, I advocate with the opinion the students who aspire to better performance should be rewarded.

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policy would incentivize all students to be diligent in the study and promote healthy competition in the school, which would be of positive benefit. Take some classes as an example. Every time students

gets

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get

a higher

achieve

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achieves

than the previous exams, he or she would be paid compliments as well as monetary rewards. Not only will

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inspire learners to be more creative in their studies, but

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they all

endeavor

a purposeful or industrious undertaking (especially one that requires effort or boldness)

endeavour

to study harder

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. In conclusion, while there are many reasons to support only rewarding

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for

top students, I contend that any improvement should be appreciated.