Overpopulation of urban areas has led to numerous problems. Identify one or two serious ones and suggest ways that governments and individuals can tackle these problems.

The growth
undercontrol
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under control
of
population
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the population
heads
tha
definite article
the
to
Thai
mains
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main
problens
a state of difficulty that needs to be resolved
problems
of
cities
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city
centers
an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centres
.
This
essay will discuss why
superpopulation
is a serious issue for
metropolitans
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metropolitan
cities and give two possible solutions. Perhaps the most important reason of the overpopulation being a lead of problems is because of a lack of
job
opportuties
a possibility due to a favorable combination of circumstances
opportunities
for the
population
or in the other way to say, it causes a large number of
competidors
the contestant you hope to defeat
competitors
in a
job
application. As a
results
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result
, the
avrange
approximating the statistical norm or average or expected value
average
of salary is extremely low if
compare
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comparison
with others cities and
also
there a large amount of
unemployee
not engaged in a gainful occupation
unemployed
. Another key factor is, due the highest number of employment the residents of urban areas,
its
the thing named or in question
it
makes the society
poor
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poorer
and with less access to the basic
infrascture
.
This
mean
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means
that, they
will required
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will require
more help from the government. Fortunately,
however
, there are two promising solutions to
this
problem. Frist of all, local governments should incentive the growth of regional areas.
This
would make people let the
center
an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centre
cities and reduce the number of
population
. For
exemple
an item of information that is typical of a class or group
example
examples
, in Australia, the
governanment
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
government
has a regional area incentive for non-Australian residents, which means is much easier get a permanent work visa in regional areas than get a visa in urban areas.
Secondly
, as
a
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an
individual, I would recommend the young
population
start their career in others cities. Me as
a
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an
exemplo
an item of information that is typical of a class or group
example
exemplar
, I
always looking
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am always looking
always look
for
job
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a job
far from
cities center
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the city centre
cities centre
city centre
city center
, I know it has a lack of opportunities
although
the salary normally is much higher. In conclusion, the lack of
job
opportunities and the miserable
population
is the results of the main problem in
cities
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city
city's
center
an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centre
caused for the overpopulation. I recommend that governments address
this
issue by
incentiving
the
increasement
of regional areas and the young peoples should take
this
opportunitie
a possibility due to a favorable combination of circumstances
opportunity
opportunities
to start their
careears
the particular occupation for which you are trained
careers
carers
career
and families far from urban areas.
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