Some people say that the main environmental problems of our times is the loss of particular species of plants or animals. Others say that there are more important environmental issue problems. Discuss both view and give you own opinion.
It is true that the cause of
environmental crisis
is a controversial topic in human society. While it can be argued that the extinction of some plants or animals is an extremely serious issue, I believe that there are more leading factors which contribute to the environmental degradation.
There are several reasons why the loss of endangered Suggestion
the environmental crisis
species
could affect the ecosystem severely. Use synonyms
To begin
with, the loss of a specific Linking Words
species
could raise the number of endangered Use synonyms
species
. Use synonyms
For example
, some particular birds and deer use Linking Words
herbal
as a main source of food, the missing of herbal directly impact on the number of these two animals due to food shortages and living on the edge. As a Suggestion
herbs
consequent in
the long-term Suggestion
consequence, in
consequence in
this
could pose a significant threat to human lives. Linking Words
Furthermore
, the loss plants or animals Linking Words
such
as herbal will lead to the lack of medicine and medical treatment since they are integrated into Linking Words
medical area
. More specifically, some special herbals are used as cures Suggestion
the medical area
to
diseases, if the extinction happened Suggestion
for
on
these plants, human are Suggestion
to
impotent
to treat these deadly diseases.
Despite the above arguments, there are more serious environmental issue we are facing. of great significance or value
important
Firstly
, climate change is a major concern in every nation. Linking Words
This
could be caused by the Linking Words
excessively
use of unrenewable energy and emit exhaust fumes Suggestion
excessive
such
as carbon dioxide results in the depletion of natural resources, the change of weather pattern. Linking Words
Secondly
, due to the global warming problem, the process of melting glaciers has been speeded up dramatically lead to the rise of sea levels. Linking Words
As a result
, Linking Words
this
leads to the habitat destruction of many animals Linking Words
such
polar bear and penguin in Linking Words
Artic
.
In conclusion, the vanishing of certain Suggestion
the Artic
species
damage to our community heavily in different ways and deserved to receive more Use synonyms
attentions
, Suggestion
attention
however
, it is not the only major issue we are facing nowadays.Linking Words
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