Some people believe charity organisations should only offer help to people of their own countries. Others against it. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Many believe that humanitarian organisation should target their local residents in terms of financial assistance,

while

others think that they should provide aid everywhere in the world. From my point of view, these

organisations

should not have any boundaries for helping the less fortunate;

otherwise

, it will be challenging to tackle some massive issues for any particular

country

's

charities

. There are many reasons to spend charity

fund

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in own

country

.

To begin

with, some

organisations

have financial limitations.

For example

,

charities

operating in poor countries have a shortage of money, so in that case, it will be impossible to help other nations, and if they do so, their citizen will

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unprecedentedly.

Also

, many

charities

collect their fund from local reach people, and it will be justified if these collections

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for needy residents of

this

country

that will motivate affluent people to donate more in the future;

as a result

, a lot of problems will be alleviated.

On the contrary

, these types of

organisations

should come forward to any countries

similarly

.

Firstly

, we all are human beings and creatures of God, so we all have equal rights to receive cooperation, and without it, many nations can not enjoy their life properly.

For instance

, when

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virus remerged in Liberia, all

country

's

organisations

gave financial and medical support to combat

this

fatal disease;

otherwise

, it would have been tough to contain it for Liberia, and now they are considered

as

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an Ebola

virus free

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country

and leading a comfortable life.

Secondly

, developed

country's

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countries'

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NGO s

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NGOs

have huge resources which are logical to utilise

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beyond their territories

that

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will not only improve the condition of impoverished countries but

also

create a cordial diplomatic relation between them.

To conclude

, people have different notions about international assistance through charity, but

the

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charities

should prioritise problems over the location